Fuck, man...
Yea, heres a few things:
1. Arg, such a blatant copy of the real Pico... Though you may have drawn the characters yourself, it is so plainly copied from Tom and Jose's version.
2. Think up some of your own ideas, man.
3. Waaaaay to easy...
4. Arg, don't submit demos. I know you wanna hear feedback and have people acknowledge the "Time Crisis" feature and the "copied graphics", but really, just finish the game and submit that.
5. ... Arg... basterd.